Stinetty (sillyme27) wrote in pic_n_poem,
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...Is Anybody Out There???

I joined this community at least a week ago, maybe two, and I have yet to receive any entries. (I added the community to my friend's page.) Is this a recently added community? No one seems to update...

I guess I'll add one of my poems, and hopefully I'll get some comments. I'll take the good and the bad; any criticism is respected. Thanks in advance, and hope to see some entries from other people. Laters.

Power Of Innocence

A little child,
Glowing white,
Sitting calmly atop dark skies,
Hovering over a blackened world
In the midst of danger,
Smiles.
Scattered wreckage spreads below,
However,
She is untouched;
Unknowing of this
Terror beneath,
Blind to her surroundings of
Brokenness,
Unaware of corruption's shadow.
She is numb.
She is protected
Near the heart of inconvenience by
Innocence.
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